Guess what guys!

[Esther]

i asked my brother last night if i can record my songs with him...possibly over the week..he said YES!.....well actually he said "Sure, i'll take you to my Recording booth in my DJ room"...how awesome is that?!....just a little help you guys ...which version of Soft spoken shoul i use for the recording....should i do

Version 1..which goes like this 1 dash means a low note two dashes means a low note then a higher note...i underlined the emphasis...isis..isss:

VERSION 1

I try to speak,
i know that it's abs-u-rd,
because i know that i can't be hea-rd.
' cause i'm so soft-spo-ken,
yes i-'m so soft-spo-ken.


or Version Two..which goes like this..1 dash means a low note. 2 dashes means a low note then a higher note..3 or more dashes means a combined low note -high note-high note-low note emphasis...i went kinda fancy in this one.....so...which one should i use?..you decide:

VERSION 2

I try to speak,
i know that it's abs-u-rd,
because i know that i can't be hea-rd.
' cause i'm so soft-spo-ken,
yes i-'m so so-ft-spo-o--ken.