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Old 07/16/06, 12:03 AM   #1
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Default For Her Sister She Tells

Since it got cut out of the forum I thought I would put it back up. I wrote this for my sister.

She sits alone in the dark room.

Waiting for her time to come.

a time to put him in his tomb

He goes to pay for what he's done.


To some she would seem weak.

But to those who know what she seeks

she is as strong as can be expected.

in these times that are so hectic.


She sits alone in her chair.

Thinking of her sister too.

In the crowd she feels him stare.

Telling what he tried to do.
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Old 07/18/06, 04:41 PM   #2
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Awesome!!!
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Old 07/18/06, 07:33 PM   #3
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i agree, i like it.
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Old 07/19/06, 09:44 AM   #4
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I like it, the emotion it portrays, and the ryhming brings it out more.
Great job!
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