Kamen rider Neos: The Next Kabuto

[kabuto121]

coming soon

[Kusakabe Souji]

Cant wait to see it

[kabuto121]

I'm going to start writing soon. I'll give you a sample. it take place after god speed love but kabuto donsnt die! insted a comer tries to steal kabuto's thunder and glory.

[kabuto121]

Kamen Rider Neos: The New Dawn
EPISODE #1

A year after the crissis that was GOD SPEED LOVE the world seemed at peace. But what no one knows is that when the great warrior Kamen Rider Kabuto deffeted the all powerfull zect leader rider Cacasuss, Cacasuss drifted off far away into space a mysterius worm artifact came apon him and Cacasuss used the last of his powers to ecstract the artifact's worm DNA and used it to gain back his true power to return to earth and destroy his enamy kabuto.

Meanwhile back in Japan-
Tendu is on his way back to the cafe when he hears an strange sound comming from an aly way. . .
"Hmm, what is that?"
"come out now, right now!"

Knowing Tendu he walks into the aly with no problem.
Tendu takes a short pause as a black figure aproches him.
"Becarefull for now on kabuto! I'll be watching for now on!"
Tendu-"what?"

Later on in the day Tendu finnaly reaches the cafe were huri is waiting for him. Tendu walks in the door and pulls up a chair, after Tendu pills up the chair he walks back to the kitchen where huri is preparing some dishis.
Tendu-"Good Morning."
Huri-"I miss them, I miss them all oni-san."
Tendu-"Don't worry."
Tendu walks back walks back to the chair and sits down,
Huri-"why did they have to die oni-san?"
"we'll never see them agin. . .(huri takes a tearfull pause.)
strugling to speak while tearing she replises. . . "Tsrugi, Kagami, Dasuke,"
Tendu-"they died fighting huri and thats whats important. I'll go pick up some rice cakes. I'll be back"
Tendu gits up and pushes in the chair and walks out the door. As he walks out smoke fills the street. a strange figure amurges in the fog.
Figure-"Hello Tendu my name is Yakashi zect code name BOUNTY and I am the new Punch Hopper. . ."
Tendu-weres that punk kegayama?"
Yakashi-"That punck was my brother and he is now dead and I want to find his killer!"
Tendu-"So you want a fight verywell but you pick the wrong one. . . HENSHIN" "CAST OFF. . .CHANGE BEETLE! ! !"

Kabuto and the new Punchopper charge at each other when all of sudden a mysterius blast falls between them knocking them their seperate ways. After the exsplosion smoke appears and inside the smoke a mysterius figures stand up \
Figure-"HA HA HA. . . TENDU!"
Tendu-"oh no"
Tendu looks at the figure with a sigh.
"CACASUSS?"
Cacasuss looks over his shoulder.
Cacasuss-"and you are"
Yakashi-"I' am the Punchhopper."
Cacasuss-"Then you will die with your friend."
Another mystirerius figure appears. then figure walks down toward Yakashi.
Figure-"I am the zect rider NEOS-KABUTO! Now leave them alone."
Cacasuss-"Make me!"
Neos-"very well. . . RIDER SMASH. . .(RIDER SMASH)."
(rider smash is a powerfull punch that is as powerfull as Kabuto's rider kick.)
The rider smash hits Cacasuss directly.
Yakashi-"whoooooow"(yakashi dives out the way as the rider smash almost hits them.)
Cacasuss-"AHHHHH"(suprisingly Cacasuss deflects it.)
Kabuto-"what?"
Cacasuss flees.

Kabuto changes back into Tendu and Punchhopper changes back into Yakashi.
Neo-"We will meet agin in time Tendu Souji."
Neos walks away.
Yakashi flees while Kabtuo stares in confusion.

END

[Kusakabe Souji]

Well there were several spelling errors, Tendou didnt quote obachan and I found episode 1 a little short, but still cant wait for episode 2.

[kabuto121]

Originally Posted by Kusakabe Souji

Well there were several spelling errors, Tendou didnt quote obachan and I found episode 1 a little short, but still cant wait for episode 2.

Thanks and i'll make sure I'll take a little more time to write #2 so it can be longer i'll start writing soon. the reason it was short because I wanted to how you felt about it. and do me a favor can please tell your friends.

[kabuto121]

Kamen Rider Neos: A new rival
EPISODE#2

In our last episode we found out that the evil zect rider Cacassus has returned more powerfull and more stronger than ever. We also found out that Kegayama's older brother has become the next punch hopper and is lerking for revenge of his killer wich he doesn't know is the very thing he swore his life to work for zect. And also we find out theirs a new powerfull rider named Neos.

Tokyo city streets-
Tendu-"What just happened?"
Tendu walks baciks to the shop to find everyone worryed.
Huri-"Onichan are you okay?"
Tendu-"I'm fine Huri."
Huri-"I herd some thuds and bangs and I thought that..."
Tendu-"I'm fine huri and I got those rice balls."
Huri-"stop it why do you do that?"
Tendu-"Do what?"
Huri-"That mocho tought-guy thing.... this.. this act!"
Tendu-"look huri its okay I'm fine ,I'm here so can we all relax?"
Huri takes a short pause and snaches the rice balls from tendu then walks away.

Later that day Tendu is on his way home when all of a sudden he's stoped in his path by a black shaded figure in the night.
Tendu-"Who are you?"
FIgure-"You will find out in time."
Tendu pulls over his vest reveling his henshin belt with caution.
Figure-"There is no need for that I just want to talk to.....
As the figure tries to talk a strange noies appers tot he left of them.
Tendu-"Natives...But I thought that me and kagami...
Fiugre-"Theres no time now....HENSHIN-(HENSHIN)
Without notice the figure steps in the way of a light as he henshins revealing his secret identity.
Tendu-"Tsrugi?"
Tsrugi while smiling and trying to henshin stops himself and steps back into the shade.
Tendu-"Tsrugi how are you....Alive?"
the natives start attacking.
Tsrugi-"ahh hi Tendu(smiles)!"
Tendu-"HENSHIN!-CAST OFF....
Tsrugi-"HENSHIN!-CAST OFF....
CHANGE BEETLE-CHANGE SCORPIAN....

Kabuto and sassword charge at the natives and start to fight.
As they start to fight Yakashi happens to walk by and sees the fight and runs tords it.
Yakashi-"Tendu? but whos he fighting with? well then...HENSHIN-CHANGE PUNCH HOPPER!
The fight rages on intensely bewteen the riders and the native worms.
Kabuto-"CLOCK UP-CLOCK UP...
Sassword-"CLOCK UP-CLOCK UP...
Punch Hopper-CLOCK UP-CLCK UP...

RIDER KICK-RIDER SLASH-RIDER PUNCH...
CLOCK OVER!

The worms are defeted, Sassword changes back into the Tsrugi.
Kabuto changes back into Tendu.
Tendu-"What is going on how are you alive?"
as they talk Yakashi runs off into the knight.
Tsrugi-"Iknow right its cool I'm alive.its simple really the sassword zector did something. I thought it might have been the bond from me being chosen for sassword.

Tendu-"I have to go."
Tendu walks off.
Tsrugi-"see you Onichan!"
Tsrugi happaly runs back to his home.
The next morning at Tendu's house just like every morning Tendu is cooking breakfest for his little sister when a knock sounds on the door.
Tendu's sister-"I'll get it Tendu... who is it?"
she opens the door...
Tendu's sister-"Hi Gon!"
at the door its Gon and her biological mother.
Gon's mother-"well its been a year now and I thought we stop by and she could stay for a little, I dont know maybe you could take her out somewhere like the cafe or something. you know go have some fun."
Tendu-"will do. hey sis why dont you take Gon outside while me and her mother sit and have a talk,"
Tendu's sister-"ok."
Tendu and Gon's mother sit and have a talk.
Tendu-"so have you told gon about Dauske?"
Gon's mother-"no I just couldn't find a way, you dont know how hard it is to do somthing like that. to tell a little girl that the very person she loved who basicly raised her through half of her life is gone, gone fighting for her. I just can't do that."
Gon's mother starts to tear.
Tendu-"someone needs to tell her. she cant live a lie her whole life."
Gon's mother-"I know but its just so hard, so so hard."
Tendu-"I know. Grandmother said this if a very spirit can give his or her own life for someone they love then that person has not truley gone but has lived on forever."
Gon's mother-"Thank you for everything I'll be back tomorrow to pick her up."
Gon's mother opens the door almost walking out..
Tendu-"dont let it bother you I'll work it out."
Gon's mother-"ok."
she walks out the door.

Three hours later gon and Tendu's sister have not come back from playing outside. Then Tendu hears a noise from outside.
Tendu-"somethings wrong."
Tendu goes to look outside and dashes to the cafe...
Tendu-"Huri, huri, huri?"
Huri runs out the kitchen...
Huri-"what,what happened?"
Tendu-"Have you seen Gon and my sister?"
Huri-"no. Why whats wrong?"
Tendu-I'll be back if you see them make sure they stay here ok?"
Huri-"yeah sure...
Tendu dashes around to the back of the cafe.
Huri-"Onichan wait?"
When Tendu gets to the back of the cafe he pulls a sheet off of an object. When he pulls the sheet of the object it reveals to be his old zect bike.
Tendu-"hope this old thing still runs?"
Tendu gets on the bike and rides off.
As he rides his zector follows him leading the way to the location of gon and his sister.
Tendu finaly finds drag marks in the ground he knows he is geting closer.
finally he finds them tied up under an abanden brige.
Tendu-"Gon? sister?"
All of a sudden a worm jumps from the top of the brige and lands behind him.
Gon-"Tendu watchout."
Tendu turns around with a back kick to the worms face making the worm step him three steps back.
Tendu-"I dont know where you came from or how your here but you'll wish you weren't..... HENSHIN-(HENSHIN)!"
Tendu henshins and starts to fight the monster off when the worm transforms into a more powerfull worm know known as the delta worm.
Kabuto-"What? The worm has restored power somehow?"
As kabuto tries to fight off the delta worm a mysteriuos shot fires at the worm.
Kabtuo-"Huh?"
Gon-"DAUSKE!"
Tendu's sister-"And Tsrugi!"
Dauske-"Don't worry gon your safe."
Dauske jumps off the top of the brige along with Tsrugi running behind him to the battlefield.
Dauske-"HENSHIN!"
Tsrugi-"HENSHIN!"
Yakashi runs out nowhere to the battlefeild.
Yakashi-"Not this time Tendu!"
Kabuto-"Yakashi?"
Tsrugi-"Hey Kegayama!"
Yakashi-"HENSHIN!-(CHANGE PUNCH HOPPER)-Out my way!"
Yakashi pushes Tsrugi out the way.
Sassword-"Hey whats wrong with Kegayama?"
Kabuto-"It's not Kegayama! His name is Yakashi."
Sassword-"What happened to Kegayama?"
Dragonfly-"Can we talk about this later...
Dragonfly gets hit by three more delta worms that jump off the top of the brige.
...CAST OFF-(CHANGE DRAGONFLY)"
Sassword-"CAST OFF-(CHANGE SCORPIAN)"
Kabuto-"CAST OFF-(CHANGE BEETLE)-CLOCK UP-(CLOCK UP)"
Sassword-"CLOCK UP"
Dragonflyy-"COLCK UP."
Kabuto,Sassword, and Dragonfly use their rider kick, slash, and shooting.
Gon-"you did it!"
Yakashi runs off unsatisfied.
Kabuto, Sassword, and Dragonfly change back-"CLOCK OVER!"
They all return home.

Next Morning-

Tendu-"I'll get it."
Theres a knock on the door. Tendu opens it, its gon's mother,
Gon's mother-"Hi."
gon runs to the door with dauske walking behind her. gon's mother looks at Dauske in fear and shock.
Gon's mother-" Oh...oh hi Dauske."
Gon-"Thank you Tendu, bye Dauske."
Gon leaves with her mother and goes home.

Dauske-"her mom looks a little pail looks like a job for...
Tendu-"wait... "
Tendu stops Dauske from picking up his mackup kit.
Tendu-"how are you here rina said she watch you die, she said they found atleast fifteen to tweenty bullets in your body."
Dauske-"I dont know what happened. I remember everything as if it just happened. I just woke up and I found the Drake gripp in my pocket it was weird as if I was dreaming."
Tendu looks with confusion.
Dauske-"Nice talking but I have some buisness to do."
Dauske picks up his makeup kit and runs out the door.
Tendu-"Wait."
Dauske-"Hey gon wait up."
Dauske runs for the car as it drives away.
Gon-"mom wait."
Dauske runs up to her moms window.
Dauske-"Not to be rude but you look a little pail and I dont know if gon has told you but I am a perfesional makeup artist and I was wondering if I could....
gon's mom-"sure... ok"
Dauske-"great ok.. now relax...MAKEUP!"

fifteen minutes later at the cafe-

Tendu walks in with shock.
"hi Tendu!"
Tendu-"KAGAMI?"

END

[Kusakabe Souji]

This time its a little better than the first one I'd give ep 2 a 6/10. Still several spelling errors, why dont you try rereading it and editing it, youd have less spelling errors that way

[kabuto121]

Kamen Rider Neos: New Secrets
Episode#3

In our last episode Tendu has a mystirious incounter with a strange figure that was thought to be dead richboy Tsrugi aka kamen rider scorpian. We also find out that Yakashi means buisness as he interups a fight with worms envolving sassword and Kabuto. Later on the mother of an old friend named Gon drops her off to hang out with Tendu's little sister, and both of them end up going missing. When Tendu finaly finds them he is accisted by also thought to be dead and once a big brother figure for Gon Dauske the dragonfly and Tsrugi returns, And finaly at the end of the show Tendu returns to the cafe stumbaling upon another thought to be dead friend Kagami the Gatack beetle.

The cafe-

Tendu-"Kagami?"
Kagami-"Hello Tendu, long time no see."
Tendu-"huri come here now!"

Huri runs out the kitchen in the running tord Tendu and otu the door.
Huri-"Whats wrong why aren't you happy it's Kagami, hes back!"
Tendu-"I know and thats the problem!"
Huri-"What do you mean?"
Tendu-"Yesterday I saw Tsrugi and Dauske."
As they carried on the conversation Dauske approches them.
Huri-"Dauske!"
Dauske-"Good morning Huri I'll never forget your beautifull face."
Tendu stares with suspition, Then shuves the two out the way and walks back in the cafe.
Tendu-"Everyone leave now, ecept for the three of you."
Tendu points at Huri, Dauske ,and Kagami ordeing them to to sit.
Tendu-"Kagami how are you here?"
Kagami-"well it was weird really I really dont know what happened . All I remember is you and cacasuss and me passing out in that escape pod and just woke up here."
Tendu-"Thats strange because that sounds like the same thing Dauske said."
Dauske-"I dont have to take this I have work to do."
Kagami-"Neither do I."
Tendu-"You two aren't going anywhere."
Dauske-"You'r not the boss of me. You dont order me around."
Tendu-"I said sit down."
Dauske-"Make me!"
Dauske slams his makeup kit on the floor.
Kagami and huri look in ahh.
Tendu-"Huri run tord the door now."
Huri-"Why?"
Tendu-"Because they are both WORMS!"
Huri-"How do you know?"
Tendu-"Its simple really Dauske would always treat his makeup kit as if it was a client with care and love, and the Kagami I know would have would have relised just has I did and wouldn't sit in ahh like just know."
Before Huri can move the both fake Kagami and Dauske shockingly hit Huri sendind her across the room.Then hitting Tendu sending him out the door. Tendu lies on the ground outside.
Tendu-"You shouldn't have done that...."
Tendu takes off his vest throwing it to the side while standing up.
Tendu-"HENSHIN!"
As Tendu henshins the fake Kagami and Dauske change into their true worm forms.
Worm 1-" You should had minded your buiness rider."
Both of the worm's outer shell broke off and they changed into Delta worms.

But what Tendu donsnt know is that Huri looks aover to the corner and sees Gon standing their and watching Kagami and Dauske transform into the worms. Gon tumbles to the ground and cries. But the fight rages on.

Gon screams out at the top of her lungs...
Gon-"Dauske, Kagami!"
The worms stop in their tracks and strugle to move.
CHANGE SCORPIAN-
Tsrugi runs to the rescue to atend the Kabuto in battle
Sassword-"Tendu whats wrong with them?"
Kabuto-"It seems like Huri's voice trigered their human minds. The worm part of them seems to be fading away.
Sassword-"wow. Are they going to be ok?"
finaly Kagami and Dauske pass out on the ground.
2hours later-

Dauske wakes up but tied up with Kagami inside an abanden warehouse.

back at the cafe-
Tsrugi-"so Tendu how did you know I wasn't a worm to?"
Tendu-"It's simple because I already destroyed your worm half and trying to duplicat it would be to hard and the procces will be to unstable."
Huri-"We are out of riceballs."
Tendu-"fine I'll pick some up.
Tendu walks out the cafe and down the street looking for a market stand.
As Tendu is walking he struck by a unknown force but catches the blow.
Tendu-"Yakashi! What do u want?"
Yakashi-"Nothing but just to let u know to watch your back Kabuto. There are strange things occuring."
Tendu-"You already seem pretty strange yourself Yakashi."
Yakashi-"Awww Thats so sweat coming from you Tendu."
Tendu-"The sound of sarcasim must be amusing to you when it comes from your mouth."
Yakashi-"Ooh yes indeed Tendu I'll be seeing you around."
Tendu-"hey Yakashi, you shouldnt be looking forward to it."
Yakashi-"Oh Tendu but I am and so WILL HE!"
Yakashi walks off in laughter.
Tendu murmers to himself-"He?"
Tendu walks back to the cafe.
Tendu walks in.
Huri-"did u get the rice balls?"
Tendu-"Sorry Huri I have to make a quick stop. Tsrugi come with me."
Tsrugi-"Were are we going?"
Tendu-"We have to go to the warehouse."
Tsrugi and Tendu arrive at the warehouse only to see that Kagami and Dauske are gone."
Tendu-"I knew it."
Tsrugi-"Tendu look out."
Tsrugi pushes Tendu and jukes the attack then at the same time landing a drop kick the the face of a worm.
Two figures amerge from dust in the warehouse....
Tsrugi_"Hey look."
Tendu-"Dauske and Kagami."
Kagami-"You forget Tendu that we are all in this together."
Dauske-"Thats right riders to protect."
Kagami-"Ready?"
"Wait a minute you guys werent thinking about fighting without me were you?"
Tendu-"Yakashi!"
Yakashi-"You had a point their dragonfly, Tendu we maybe enemys but we are riders. Tendu just think of this as a one time thing!"
Tendu-"FINE!"
Tendu-"HENSHIN"
Tsrugi-"HENSHIN"
Kagami-"HENSHIN"
Dauske-"HENSHIN"
Yakashi-"HENSHIN"

The five riders charge at the one worm.
Yakashi-"The wrom is duplicating itself."
Dauske-"That just makes it all the much better than.... CAST OFF"
Tendu-"CAST OFF"
Tsrugi-"CAST OFF"
Kagami-"CAST OFF"

Yakashi-"screw this bull... RIDER JUMP/RIDER PUNCH"
Yakashi destroys half of the bunch of worms.

A strange bolt of lightning occurs at the center of this small worm armada.

Tendu-"oh no!"
Yakashi-"Damnit."
"Aww Tendu whats wrong?"

Kagami-"Cacassus? But I thought we...."
Cacassus-"You thought wrong little one."

"CHANGE NEOS BEETLE!"

Neos-"stand back cacassus."
TO BE CONTINUED